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散文鉴赏:互助-王蒙

2013-10-14 13:02

互助
王蒙
Helping Each Other
Wang Meng

L君跻身文坛,盖有年矣,但总是红不起来,颇感寂寞。于是,他找到了各种关系,以盛宴重礼把著名的评论家J君招待了一次。J君有感于其情之盛,慨然允诺说:“现在他们对你太冷落了,就是不公平!我一定要写一篇推荐你的作品的文章,登到大报上,你的作品的优点是……”
Mr. L. had been a member of the literary circles for years without attracting any public attention. He felt rather deserted, and so he managed through various personal connections to invite Mr. J., a famous literary critic, to an elaborate dinner besides presenting him with expensive gifts. Mr. J. was quite moved by Mr. L.’s hospitality and promised right away, "It's not fair that you have been so ignored! I must write an article for a key newspaper to recommend your works. The merits of your works are...
注解:
1、be a member of the literary circles”跻身文坛”的意义
2、without  attracting any public attention,可以改译为without being famous
或without being recognized
3、for a key newspaper,可以改为,write an article in a key newspaper  to recommend your works
4、把the merits of your works are 改为,there are great number of merits in your works,they are 应更地道一些
   
    L君不等I君说完,慌忙摆手摇头,他说:“千万不必!千万不必!我只乞求您写一篇义正词严的文章把我批一个狗血淋头!积数十年之经验,我深知凡被您批了的,都可以风行全国,名震环球!而您也可以获得另一方面的美誉和利益,那才叫相反相成,相得益彰!”
Mr. L. cut in,  hastily shaking his head and waving his hands," No! No! I only beg you to write a very severe criticism against me. From my years of experience, I have come to the conclusion that the authors of all articles you criticize will become popular not only in our country but also in the world. Meanwhile, you gain greater fame and interests through your criticism. It is indeed `extremes meet' and hill only end up with mutual help and benefit!"
注解:
1、译文首句翻译连贯,表意准确from my years of experience  “积数十年之经验”的翻译
2、I come to the conclusion that ,此添加结构,更加准确,更复合英文表达习惯
3、not in our country but also in the world 不妨译为not only countrywide but also worldwide,体裁上会更好一些


 


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